Alice is Wilting

I'm happy with my rephrases in panel 3, but i'm unhappy with how it affects panel 4. I'll work on it.

Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/765945

Cicada VS Marisa

Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/761892

Miko Cushion

Edited in translated SFX this time.
Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/784277

Miko Retriever

Another new edit!

Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/761325

I rotated the box on the first panel to fit the words "Balance Ball". I haven't received any feedback on that change.

Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/761893

Second edit ever. Ran into some serious difficulties with a slightly lower resolution source file. Consulted 4chan, and this is best I can do in paint.net. I'll try to revise this in Photoshop latter.

Source:http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/777068

Returning to the 1700 pixel tall version, the problems all smooth out again. I think I nailed this one first try!

Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/777070

Baby's First Copy Edit

Alright! Time for an adventure into the wonderous world of copy editing! Laying my eyes on a soft translated danbooru comic, I knew the translation had to be set in cold hard lettering upon the face of the pee en gee!

Source: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/775748

With some consultation from 4chan, I managed to fix my horrific first attempt into something worth laying eyes on.